Ravenstreak--Stormclan

[Your Raveneshness 0.o]

Name: Ravenstreak
Moons: 31
Gender: Tom
Clan: StormClan
Rank: Deputy
Short-Description:

A brown tabby with a black streak running down his back and dull green eyes.

Picture:

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Description:

Ravenstreak is a dark brown tabby. He also has a stunningly raven black streak running down his back. His eyes are a striking green. His nose is a duller pink, and he has white paws. His fur is long and fluffy, keeping him warm during the harsh leaf-bares. Lynxwing's proud mate, he loves her with all his heart. He has oddly hairy ears, and it makes it hard for him to hear sometimes.

Personality:

Ravenstreak is proud. He has pride for everything he does, every mouse he catches, and every kit Lynxwing bores to him. He can be trickster, and can sometimes be a pain or get out of hand. He is extreamly close to Lynxwing, and can be extreamly shy or have loss for words meeting someone new of higher athority. When he or anyone close to him gets insulted or gets caught up in a fight, he will quickly, without pausing to think of what he is doing, defend them. He thinks he's all-that with the she-cats, but Lynxwing stpooed that flirtatious part of his character!

History:

Ravenstreak was born a loner, living next to Lynxwing. He was Maxwell. On his first time in the woods, Ravenstreak met Lynxwing. Ravenstreak immeditly fell in love with this beautiful she-cat. Then he realized that not long after that, she had run away. So, he followed her until he came to the Clans. Then he stopped. He realized that he was caught in a big dcision. Ravenstreak finally became a warrior in StormClan, following Lynxwing to the clan she chose. Lynxwing was so happy and they became mates.

Role Playing Example:

Maxwell awoke to a yowling. He ran outside of his warm Twoleg home and saw lynx running into the forest. He ran after her. Then he stopped, almost going head-on with Nues, the biggest, meanest cat around here. But nuse seemed distracted, so, one massive black paw came bellowing into raven's tabby head and sent him crashing into a great oak. He sat there for quiet some time. Finally, when he got up, Maxwell wobbled this way, then that, then this, and finally stood up strait. He strated his tracking for Lynx, the love of his life, right away.

Maxwell shivered from the cover of a branch if a baby maple. He was at the very top of the tree. This young, slim, energetic cat would never tip this strong, taddler tree over. Once he had spotted Lynx run into some sort of camp, he had stopped dead. Maxwell had never thought about joining those vicious, fighting cats. He never thought about hunting for himself, for every meal, sometimes gpoing days without food. Then, he never thought about running free, eating fresh food, th pride of someday becoming a leader. Nues told him about that stuff. After a day or so, he decided to go and join. He was starving, and they let him in. He became Rvenpaw, then ravenstreak. he rpoved his loyallty by chasing a fox away from the nursery, and thats how he became deputy of StormClan

Codeword: Rapids
Other:

I will creat lynxwing later.

[xxdarky.]

There is Tundrasnow applying for Deputy too, so when that bio is finished Sakura will decide which one is the better cat for the position.

Edit:
Unfortunately Tundrasnow was chosen to be deputy. Would you like to just make him a warrior? Or there is StormClan deputy still open if you would like to try for that instead?

[Your Raveneshness 0.o]

Umm...I will make him try out for Stormclan deputy. Thanks!

[xxdarky.]

Alright, this is the third biography up for StormClan deputy. We are going to have another one coming too, so after that is up, we'll have Sky decide which one is best for the spot ^^

[Your Raveneshness 0.o]

Okie dokie!

[xxdarky.]

Also, do you think you could shorten your short description a bit? Get rid of the "Ravenstreak is a..." and maybe the eyes part too.

[bird]

I think Ravenstreak can be accepted as StormClan deputy. His personality seems to fit the job very well. Congrats! =] As long as you're active...=] Accepted.