Post by Your Raveneshness 0.o on Jul 30, 2007 18:30:04 GMT -5
Name: Nervestar
Moons: 47
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: StormClan
Rank: Leader
Short-Description:
Other:
Moons: 47
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: StormClan
Rank: Leader
Short-Description:
A short-haired silver tabby she-cat.Picture:
NervestarDescription:
Nervestar's peltPersonality:
Nervestar's pelt is silver. But, covering this beauty are black stripes. On her face, black stripes coming away from her nose make them look like thick, black whiskers. Her tail is plain silver, and her paws are, too. Her underbelly is speckled with black and gray, making it stand out from the rest of her body. She is reeking up feminent beauty!
Nervestar's eyes
Nervestar's eyes are beautiful. At first glance, they sparkle, but then the sparke dies if you stare deeply into them. If you really look deep into them, you can see the pain from her past (see history) And if to add on to that, they are speckled with blue.
Nervestar's body/frame
Nervestar is skinny. Very skinny. But that is the result you get for rarely eating! But, her body is liethe and flexible. During battle, she is excellent. I mean she swirves, missing her apponent because of her uniqely formed body.
Nervestar's teeth/claws
Her claws are a dull gray, shaded over time. But, they still carry the fierce intensity of when she was young. They may be dull, but they are the most deadliest weapon. No, I'm not kidding. You do NOT want to meet this fierce leader in battle. Oh, and I haven't even gotten to her teeth yet. Her teeth are sparkling white, and when the sun refects them...oh wow. They can blind you with sheer beauty. And, not meening to brag, but she takes really good care of them. I mean like really good care of them. They may look dull (result of getting older), but they re sharp, and they seem to have a mind of her own.
as a kit...History:
As a kit, Nervestar was very, very, very shy. Her feelings were hidden, in her words and in her eyes. But, as she grew, she realized that she had to express her feelings in some way. So, when she became an apprentice, she changed. She became something no cat in the entire foret would've expected.
as an apprentice...
After Nervestar became an apprentice, she became perky, spirited, and nosy. But, it seemed to her that everything that had changed about her was against her will. So, she also became very moody. One moment, she could be chatting with a cat, the next clawing his/her ears off because of something they said. This got her into trouble alot. So, her attitude became fierce, unkind, and willing to do anything. She would either make the dare or do the dare. She was kind to no one, not even her closest friend, who was Dewpaw.
warrior...
As a warrior, Nervestr was becoming a ghost of her former self. You could see it in her eyes, sense it in her smell, hear it in her voice. Nervestar was now a ghastly, inward, firce, battle-hungry raging warrior. Although Nervestar never got to fight in a real battle, she was always battle hungry.
deputy..
A dream come true. But, once again, her personality changed. To please the clan, she became the perky, out-going, nosy deputy that she once was as an apprentice. But, the nosy part soon became the most important part of her entire life when she foun out after a gathering that RavenClan was going to raid StomClan after quarter-moon.
what she is now...
When Nervestar became leader, she became leader, her attitude changed once and for ll. She became a loyal, trushworthy, energetic leader that is strict, reasonable, and responsible when needed. Also, she can be a trickster filled with prank after prank and nothing but good humor.
as a kit...Role Playing Example:
Nervekit was born to Jaguarpaw and Fethed. Her mother, Jaguarpaw, was forced to mate with a rouge as an apprentice. Her brother and sister, Mercykit and Shadedkit were given up as birth, abandoned by their mother. Jaguarpaw left them becaus she had found a nursing queen who only offered to take in one kit. And, thank StarClan that it was Nervekit.
Now, as a kit, Jaguarpaw took her to see Fethed regularly. She left her with him, and he abused her. Verbally and physicialy. She became really hurt, and her father always told Jaguarpaw "It was the brambles that she got stuck in." to explain the cuts and bruises. Finally, Nervekit got up the nerve to tell her mother that Fethed was abusing her.
Jaguarpaw immedietly stopped letting Nervekit see Fethed, and now she isn't even sure if he is alive.
apprenticeship...
by the apprenticeship of Nervepaw, Jaguarclaw had become a warrior. But, one day, the beautiful black she-cat mysteriously disappered. Later on, Nervepaw found out that Fethed murdered her. But, we're not to that part yet, now are we?
Nervepaw was so exited to be trained by the deputy, Heronflight. But, Heronflight seemed to treat her like a kit. Always asking, "Are you okay?" or "What happened? Do you need help?" It was starting to get on Nervepaw's nerves. So, one day, while practicing battle training, Nervepaw forgot to unsheath her claws. She left Heronflight some pretty bad scratches. Unfourtatly, that was the day that Jaguarclaw was murdered. Nervepaw was now overcome by guilt, grief, and rage.
Nervepaw decided to take a walk through the forest, when she came across a febble black shape lying dead under a birch. The body of Jaguarclaw, Nervepaw's beloved mother, reeked from the scent of Fethed.
warriorship....
Nervestream told the leader right after her warrior ceremony that she needed to find the murder of her mother. So,hesitently, the leader let her go. She regretfully left StormClan on a long journey to find Fethed.
As she reached the mountains, she was attacked by a band of rouges, Fethed among them. they left her, thinking she was dead, in the middle of a valley. After Nervestream had summoned the strength to get up, she began the long journey back, knowing that she would never be able to face an entire rouge band.
When Nervestream got back, she was surprised to see that Dewspirit, her beloved friend, had died. She was attacked by a badger during her vigil, and didn't make it. Nervestream was devestated, and desprate to tame her growing hunger for power.'
Nervestream tried again and again to prove herself worthy, but someone else always got the praise. Finally, after she chased a fox out of the nursery and almost sacrificed her life, she became deputy.
deputy...
As deputy, lots of fights, mostly border fights, and many cats died. It was a bad time. 3 harsh leaf-bares later, the leader died of old age. Nervestream mated and had a miscarrage, which made her even more miserable. but, when she became leader, everything became orginized and better. Much better.
Soft silver paws trembe as dark cats, their fur streaked with mud, surrounded her in a deathly silent circle. Then, a yowl came from the last cat Nervestream wanted to see. Fethed.Codeword: Rapids
"ATTACK!"
Claws flashed, fur flew, and shreiking yowles of pain came from Nervestream as she was attacked by an entire rouge band. Blood seeped from a wound on her leg, and everything hurt. Her glowing amber eyes were now dull with pain. As the rouge band began to think that it was getting easy, Nervestream decided to play a trick on them.
"Please don't kill me!"
She pleaded pitifully. Fethed, her own dark father, had killed her. Or supposably killed her. The rouge band left, a crowd of snickering, hissing, and spitting. None of them had been hurt, and Nervestream was half-dead.
I think they are gone...
Nervetsream had no idea that Fethed himself was hiding in brambles. but his shallow, quick breathing rustled the prickly bush, and Nervestream slowly pricked her matted and torn ears. Something was there, and she knew it. Her small, silver and black body twitched joyfully as Fethed left. She struggled to si up, wincing in apin every time she moved. then she felt fur brush her's.
"Eat these.
A voice like the soft breeze ruffled the ear fur, and smelled the sweet aroma of herbs.
"I am Heth. I used to be a rouge, but then I was exiled for being kind to clan cats. you eat these and I will take you home."
This cat's voice was so soft, so gentle, it made Nervestream shive with comfort. Heth flicked her tail towards the herbs, and Nervestream bent down. She slowly engulfed the herbs, and then she slowly stood up. Her ears flicked irritably as she fell down in exaustion.
Heth came to help, gracefully moving ou of her spot and twords Nervestream. Her bright pink nose nudged Nervestream to her paws, and heth let he lean against her flank. As they padded out of the clearing, the darkness of night seemed to swollow them whole.
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DONE! WH00P!
