Taintedstar [of] Stormclan

[Shadeh]

Name: Taintedstar
Moons: 30 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: StormClan
Rank: Leader
Short-Description:

A beautiful, small tabby she-cat w/chestnut brown eyes.

Picture:

Description:

.//the magnificent pelt;
The pelt is one of the most important part of a she-cat especially. Taintedstar's pelt is a mix of all sorts of colors. It gives her a unique feel to her. She has light grays, blacks, a kind of chestnut brown, a brown, and light brown in her pelt. You might think her fur looks long from far away but when you are up close it is short. Taintedstar has a white chest and white fur that kind of goes around her nose but not over her nose or at the top of her nose. Her tail is a black tail with faded dark gray stripes that you can't see in the picture but they are there, giving Taintedstar a racoon feel to her. When moonlight shines on her pelt it kind of shines a silvery-brown color.

.//dazzling eyes;
As nice as her pelt? No. Taintedstar's dazzling eyes are one of the most only things you can't take your eyes off of. Her eyes are sort of special in a way because you don't see many cats with light chestnut brown eyes like Taintedstar. Her eyes can show anger, excitement, happiness, and pain. Taintedstar's eyes shine in the nighttime and are kind of not visible because of the odd color.

.//taintedstar's size;
Oddly there was something that happend in Taintedstar's mommy the moment before she was born. That is what made Taintedstar smaller then all the other leaders. But don't let her size fool you because she has teeth and claws that are sharper then your piece of mind. Now Taintedstar is small and almost as small as an apprentice but not that small. She is about the size of a 10 moon old apprentice, kind of the size of a warrior and an apprentice put together. Taintedstar's size is put smack dab in the middle of warrior size and apprentice size.

.//teeth & claws;
When you look at Taintedstar and see her smallness you just wish you could laugh. And if you did laugh, watch your ears because this she-cat has a way with her claws. Her claws are like the blades of knives, slicing through anything's flesh and down to the bone. Taintedstar's claws are hooked at the end just to make them even better and are sharper then a bear's claws. Now some say for Taintedstar's size that her teeth ain't sharp well you are SOOOO wrong about that my friend. Her teeth are a pearly white. But how can they be a pearly white? Taintedstar takes good care of her teeth. Her teeth are like a King Cobra's [snake] fangs. So watch your back because you might just find her watching you teeth bared and claws unsheathed...

Personality:

.//a Taintedstar quote;

i am lost in my daydreams but your shadow covers me, i am left with a broken heart, you are the one i want...

.//tiny but fierce;
Difference is nothing to Taintedstar. She has a fierce personality and her eyes will look like they have fire in them when she gets mad. Now Taintedstar may be smaller then other cats but she is fiercer then a bear. Taintedstar can be dangerous when fierce and will claw you into crowfood if you make her mad. She is fierce in battle and will respect all facts and will listen to your ideas. But if she thinks they are stupid she will get fierce. So avoid her at all times if, you see her with her eyes flaring and tail lashing. Battle isn't the only thing she gets fierce about. She can get fierce about you breaking the warrior code or you disobeying her. Taintedstar is a tainter and can taint you till your eardrums blow up! That is how she got her name and became fiercer then ever...

.//a daydreamer;
Daydreaming is one of Taintedstar's favorite things to do. She likes to sit by the creek on some rocks and close her eyes and let the sunlight soak into her pelt. Don't disturb her when her eyes are closed and she is spread across a rock. That is a sign that she is daydreaming about something and messing up or disturbing her daydreaming can cause you your ears. Taintedstar just loves to do this, it takes her mind off of her clan and it gives her time to sort out all her problems and mash them into one.

.//a fighter;
The battle call is all Taintedstar needs to use her very well learned fighting skills. She is a fighter and will fight for half blood kits, she will fight for the Stormclan borders, and sometimes will fight to get other clans borders. Taintedstar enjoys fighting and enjoys teaching her fighting moves that her mentor Yarrowstar had taught her when she was an apprentice. Fighting gives Taintedstar a heart of steel and it gives her more swiftness, stealthness, speed, and more. She loves to fight and will fight for Starclan till all her nine lives are gone like that! Taintedstar is just a fighter and tries not to get into fighting with her warriors.

.//kind & soft-hearted;
Now you look at Taintedstar and see a fierce, fighter, a lover, a sweetheart, and steel hearted she-cat. But Taintedstar also is kind, helpful, judgemental, and can be soft-hearted. But don't think she is always a little sweet-heart because she is normally kind and soft-hearted to her elders and queens and kits. But if the kits get on her nerves then her heart will go to steel and she will become fierce about them to shut up.

So just look at Taintedstar, she is like a rainbow, a mixed up jumble of history. All these personalities Taintedstar learned in her past and now to.

.//end of Taintedstar's quote;

but you left me with pain and went for someone else. I fall into the darknesses grasp as you walk away from me in the shadows.

History:

.//life and death;
A she-cat named Grassblade in Stormclan fell in love with the deputy of Moonclan named, Firepool. Well the two met every night at midnight. Well one night Grassblade announced she was going to have Firepool's kits. One of Moonclan warriors had seen the deputy with Grassblade. The tom's name was Deathclaw and told the leader. Firepool was glared at and just ignored. But one she-cat apprentice believed in him and told him he should follow his heart. Well when Firepool joined Stormclan the leader wasn't to happy but she understood why. That was the time Grassblade had three kits. Taintedkit who is Taintedstar now, Demonkit who is now Demonheart of Moonclan, and lastly Viperkit who is now Viperfang in Ravenclan. So there was a border patrol and Taintedkit, Demonkit, Viperkit followed their father on it. There was the tom Deathclaw who was on the Moonclan patrol. The two border patrols got into a fight and soon Deathclaw killed Firepool for being a traitor. Taintedkit was the first to run back to camp and tell her mother who was found dead. Nobody knows what had happend to her mother. Most say she had a heart attack or she had a jolt of shock and it was so powerdful it killed Grassblade. Taintedkit was tainted for the rest of her kithood and so was Demonkit and Viperkit for being the three kits of a Moonclan and a Stormclan cats... Life & death happend that same day.

.//growing up & pain;
Taintedkit grew into Taintedpaw the tortured, tainted, hopeless, painful kit. She never appreciated the tainting and finally got so made Taintedpaw attacked one of the apprentice toms who was much bigger but Taintedpaw seemed to have the speed. This was a time when Blackstar the Stormclan leader died and his deputy Yarrowpool became Yarrowstar. Well Yarrowstar announced she was going to train Taintedpaw. Taintedpaw had just become a newly made apprentice the day before when Blackstar died. Taintedpaw's tainting stopped when the other apprentices found out about that. But Taintedpaw's happiness was drained away the very next day. Demonpaw and Viperpaw both announced they were leaving Stormclan. Demonpaw said he couldn't stand the jokes about them being half blooded and Demonpaw left to Moonclan his father's clan. Demonpaw was warmed welcomly because the leader at the time was glad to have one of his deceased deputies sons in his clan. Viperpaw announced he was going to Ravenclan. Taintedpaw was so shocked she felt pain that instint as if a thorn pierced her heart. Viperpaw left that same day with Demonpaw. Viperpaw was welcomed into Ravenclan, the Ravenclan cats were unaware that he was a Moonclan deceased son and a Stormclan deceased she-cats son. Growing up and pain... is the hardest thing to deal with.

.//tainted by love;
Well time passed and Taintedpaw hit seven moons old. Well she feel in love with the tom she had attacked when she first became an apprentice. He was already close to becoming a warrior and this made Taintedpaw really upset. So she asked him to go hunting with her and he said sure. Taintedpaw confessed her feelings and the tom whose name is Lionpaw was in a shocking suprise. Taintedpaw was told to meet him again the next day and Lionpaw confessed to. But neither of them knew what was going to happen... Taintedpaw was tainted by love to confess her feelings to Lionpaw.

.//tragicness;
Well what happend was Lionpaw became Lionfur and was on a patrol with his own apprentice and two other warriors and Taintedpaw. Taintedpaw now was 10 moons and soon to become a warrior. They went by the Thunderpath and monsters were speeding by. One of the warriors nudged Lionfur into the middle of the Thunderpath. WHOOSH! and then splat! Lionclaw was killed within a second. Oh boy was Taintedpaw in a rage of anger at the warrior and her heart turned heavy as if a burdian had just been laid on her shoulders. Never again would Taintedpaw love...

.//put up a good fight;
Well Taintedpaw soon became Taintedsoul. She wanted to murder the warrior whose name escapes me, since he killed the one she loved. So Taintedsoul had her best friend Stiffheart ask the tom whose name now comes back to me. His name is Darkclaw. Well Darkclaw was in love with Stiffheart and automatically said yes thinking it was Stiffheart he was going to see. But when he got to the place it was empty and he grew in a rage. Taintedsoul attacked Darkclaw and the two fought with all their heart, Taintedsoul put up a good fight and killed Darkclaw. She was a murder and she knew it and so did Stiffheart but she made an excuse saying Darkclaw had also been hit by a monster. Stiffheart nad Taintedsoul were both happy without Darkclaw. But no one knew what was going to happen with Taintedsoul now... but Yarrowstar had an idea in her mind of who to chose her deputy who had been originally Darkclaw...

.//chosen;
The moon was high and lighting up the sky when Yarrowstar called for the meeting of who would be made deputy. Every Stormclan cat there believed it would be Gorsefur a bold, strong, loyal, and brave tom who would give his life for Stormclan. But when Yarrowstar announced it was going to be Taintedsoul who at the time had an apprentice named Crystalpaw. Taintedsoul didn't feel to good about it and her stomach had tied up into a knot. Yarrowstar didn't know she had murdered Darkclaw. Taintedsoul looked around and saw all Stormclan eyes on her. One of the elders name Oneeye who was blind in one eye protested and three other cats protested against her. No other cat dared protest against Yarrowstar. And guess who was one of those protesters? Taintedsoul protested against herself. All the cats were suprised, knowing Taintedsoul was a proud and bold cat but didn't relize that she would protest against herself. In the morning Taintedsoul confessed her doing of Darkclaw. Yarrowstar was in a shocker but kept her deputy, keeping Taintedsoul's murder secret a secret. Yarrowstar died when Taintedsoul was 18 moons old.

.//look who i am;
Look who Taintedkit is now. From a half blooded kit named Taintedkit born to Grassblade a Stormclan she-cat who died and Firepool the old deceased Moonclan deputy. Without Demonheart or Viperfang, Taintedsoul did her duty as a good deputy until Yarrowstar's death which no one knows what happend. Most thought it was old age since Yarrowstar had been 56 moons at her death. Taintedsoul is now Taintedstar and will be till her death.

Role Playing Example:

Taintedstar stood in the middle of one of Stormclan's territories. A starry tom appeared to her with a golden pelt and deep forest green eyes peering back at her. Lionfur! she yowled and started running towards her old love. But Lionfur seemed to get farther and farther away. Taintedstar pressed hard on, running on her paws as fast as she could. Using all of her speed, agility, and swiftness. Lionfur, come back! she screamed. Lionfur smiled at her and winked and then started fading away. Taintedstar lept at him but landed with a oof! on the ground.

Taintedstar woke up moaning Lionfur. She looked around her den and sighed. Life had never been the same without Lionfur cheering her own and telling her that she would be a great leader. She sighed sadly and a tear slid down her check. But why did Lionfur get farther and farther away without saying anything? Taintedstar just wondered that, her mind spinning with curiousness and wondering. The leader padded outside her den to feel the cold morning mist and breeze blow her fur. Taintedstar felt like a newborn kit, getting her first step outside. Taintedstar remembered those days when it had just been her and Lionfur. Another tear slid down her check as she thought of Viperfang and Demonheart. Now that she thought about her two brothers who left Stormclan it made Taintedstar's heart hurt even worse. Taintedstar suddenly didn't feel worthy enough to be leader.

A familiar voice rang in her ears and her ears pricked at the sound of the voice. "You are never alone Taintedstar... I am with you always..." the voice said. Lionfur! she whispered and more tears streamed down her face. The morning mist was starting to clear out and Taintedstar left camp before the dawn patrol was gathered up. She padded towards her favorite rock in all of Stormclan territory next to the creek. Taintedstar spread herself out on the rock as the morning sunlight beat down on her tabby stomach. She felt calm and cool and closed her eyes. It was her only time to daydream. "Taintedstar? What are you doing?" a voice asked and Taintedstar's eyes opened in a flash to see one of Stormclan's apprentices Runningpaw looking at her. Taintedstar's lip curled into a snarl, what do you think you should be doing out here alone? And at this time of morning Runningpaw! Runningpaw reacted with a slight frown and her ears laid back on her head. Taintedstar wanted to swipe a claw over the apprentices face. "Well I followed you..." the apprentice mewed nervously. Have you not learned that disturbing me like that is unforgetable and I tell you to leave me alone! Taintedstar growled. The mist was all gone now and only sunlight dappled the ground. The creek that splashed against the bank was the only sound until Runningpaw spoke up. "I wanted to see what you were doing... that is all." The leader gave a growl of disapproval. Then flicked her tail annoyed at the apprentice to go back to camp. Runningpaw's shoulder's sagged as she walked away. Taintedstar watched her go. Then she spread back out on the rock as the sun beat down on all the clans. I can't be bothered by little apprentices right now. I need to spread my thoughts and problems out... Taintedstar thought, watching the apprentice walk away. She'll get over it! she added to her thoughts.

Codeword: Rapids
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Any quote that is written by me Shadeh or in my bios is (c) copyrighted to me. You must ask MY permission if you wish to use them.

[xxdarky.]

Do you think you could make her at least 30 moons or older? 22 moons is awfully young, not even two years old yet.
It looks nice otherwise =D We'll wait to see if there are other auditions ;]

[Shadeh]

ok. modified.