jadedmoon of moonclan

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Name: Jadedmoon
Moons: 20
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: MoonClan
Rank: Warrior
Short-Description:

A short haired, golden cat with brown eyes.

Picture:

Description:

General: Jadedmoon has a good general apperence. She is a young warrior, and still has a kit-like face, which is feature that makes her a beautiful cat.

She is a short-haired tabby; Goldenbrown with Chocolatebrown stripes.

Head: Small, but adorable! Her ears are always perked up, unless she is in a really bad mood. She has brown eyes, or hazle, in good light. At night, if the moonlight hits them just right, you can see them. She has a cute little black nose aswell.

Body: At a good size, Jadedmoon has a nice frame. She does not have any disabilaties. Yet. However, she does have alot of scars. Her whole back is golden, with her chocolate stripes almost completely covering it. She has a white belly, with some stripes over-lapping.

Hind and Legs: Jaded has a long tail, with a few ringlets on it, but her tail is mostly golden. She has all four legs and paws, the hind left one has a white boot. Her front right leg has a scar all the way down, gashing her paw. It never bleeds anymore. Just hurts sometimes.

Personality:

To herself: Jadedmoon likes to think of herself as an all-around good warrior. She doesn't care what others thnk of her, so don't try to put her down.

To others: A first-impression is always left when you meet her. To everyone, she comes on as very independent and smart, but rude. She can be a tad shy, depending. If you choose to get closer to her, she becomes a close friend. She is not very trusting, but will be if she gets close. She is open to discuss anything EXCEPT her history.

She can be devil-ish at times, so don't push your luck. If her ears are down, stay away. When she is in bad moods, Jaded will lose it and do something daring and foolish. And mean.

She does not belive in starclan.

History:

Kit: Jadedkit was always the runt of the liter. All the kits in the nursery were bigger than her, and she felt that they wouldn't want to be her friend, so she ran off. When her parents and the med cat couldn't find her, they were devistated.

Transition: During her transition from kit-hood to apprentice-hood, Jadedkit decided to relive her griving parents and come back. When she returned, she learned that they died of broken hearts. Tp punish her for her wrong doings, so called, Jadedkit wasn't allowed to become an apprentice, and was attacked by some of the older kits.

2nd Transition: Because she wasn't allowed to become and apprentice, she had to wait. And wait. And wait. Finally.

Apprentice: Finally! Jadedpaw finally became and apprentice. During this period in time, she also had a growth-spurt. She got bigger than one cat, Ashpaw, her only friend. They wanted to take on the same mentor, but Ashpaw's parents did not approve of Jadedpaw.

Transition: Jadedpaw was sent a different path than Ashpaw, and Ashpaw grew closer and closer to another apprentice he was working with. Her name was Talonpaw. Jadedpaw would never admitt she was jealous, and she grew to hate Talon and Ash.

Warrior: You can most likely guess what happened with Talon and Ash, so lets take them out of the picture for a bit.

Jadedpaw was giving the name, Jadedmoon, because she would always look at the moon, because it reminded her of Ash. Like ash, it had a dark side an a light side.

Jadedmoon finally got sick of it. Sick of it. Sh ran away again, hoping she would never get the gutts to return. She was wrong. Her first night gone, she wandered a bit too close to a two-leg place, and was attacked by a bull dog. Later that night, the patrol found her leg and paw bleeding, She was taken home.

Now: About 2 weeks after.

Role Playing Example:

Live you life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

The rest is still unwritten

You could hear the her steps, paced evenly. You could hear the crackling of leavevs if she walked...if you were awake. At 4:30 in the morning, while Julie was out for her jog, everyone else was sleeping, except her wierd old neighbor, Mr. Peterson. He would go to sleep during the day and wake up at night.

Her heart pounded as she jogged the last lap back to her house. Her brother's light was on. Julie unlocked the door and untied her ratty sneakers as fast as she could, dumping them on the nearest rug.Please dont land on the good one...Her mind raced. She didn't know why they had a good rug infront of the door, but it was not to be made a mess of.

"Rich! Richard, wake up!" Julie practicly threw herself into his room. See, when ever Rich had issues sleeping, he would turn his light on for Julie to see on her morning run. It was a saftey system they worked out.

Rich sat up straight against his headdress. "J-Julie...I wan-t-t M-m-mama."He stammered as her embraced his older sister. Julie's father was at war, and her mother had died a while ago. Rich began wailing. "Rich...it's ok. It's ok." Julie was 17, rich was 10. It was hard for 2 childeren to live off nothing in the middle of a war. Very...AH! What's the word....julie knew it....but it just wouldn't come out of her mouth. Rich had a quick coughing fit as Julie set him on her lap. "We both know mother is gone...but daddy isn't. We will send him a telegraph tomorow. Ok?" She began to mess with his hair, like mother did when she was around. Richard giggles a bit,more of a wail, and threw anot coughing fit. Crap...he is sick again.. Julie stop playing with his hair and hit herself on the forhead. Rich coughed. Again. How predictable."Rich, what feels sick, hm?" julie took his hand and walked with him nto her room.

Julie's room was rather large. It had two bed. One she slept in, and one for the baby girl mother never had. Julie plopped onto her bed and motioned for Richard. "I think it's back again."He moaned. Even his moan souned hoarse. Julie quaked inside. It was very bad. Julie got off her bed, and dashed into the bathroom. She yanked all the over filled, cluttered draws open and wildly searched for the thermomiter. Rich walked in behing her and yanked her night shirt. It read; Sleeping people parking only. All others will be toed. Julie spun around and Rich held out his had, little green thermomiter in hand. Julie washed it off and told Rich to open wide. Suddenly, the clock at the church struck 5.

1...2...3...4...5...
Julie could feel the clock inside her mathing the curch. Julie stuck the thermomiter under Richard's toung. 5 more seconds. no fever...thank the lord....

Julie took the thermomiter gently from Rich and placed it on the countertop, which was barely visable. Rich smiled as much as he could and yanked her shirt again. "Can we go back to bed now?" He yawn, then coughed. Julies took his hand. "Well, you don't have influenza again...just a cold, so why not?"

After she tucked Rich in, she turned his light off. "Night."Rich said. "Moring." Julie echoed. She walked into her room and got dressed for the rest of the day.

Codeword: Rapids
Other:

I am going to make a mini plot for her, but I see no form, so can I use my own?

Also, it is hard for me to count the # of words when it is so small, so some things may be a tad short of the requirement.